Wednesday, March 4, 2009

Chapter one part one~ The Secret He Kept Form Me.

I woke up in his arms again. I've been doing this ever since he told me his secret. He thought I was going to freak out and never talk to him again. I couldn't help to not talk to him I love him.
I remember when he told me, it was like a dream. He took me to the beach and we walked around as the sun set. When it was completely set (the sun) he turned and faced me. He stared into my peridot eyes and I stared into his aquamarine eyes. I smiled up at him expecting him to kiss me.
He just smiled back at me then said "I have a secret to tell you. It's about my family and me. You can't tell anyone else."
"O.k." I said slightly afraid that he was going to tell me that his family and him were murderers and they were running away from the police. That this was the last night I would see him.
"Don't freak out, alright?" He said looking at me seriously. "I want you to know that no harm will ever come to you. My family and I are vampires. I guess you could say that we are not normal vampires, if there is even a thing. We stick to animal blood all the time. The only time we drink human blood is if we are hurt. When we do need it my father buys it from the blood bank. The reason we have aquamarine eyes is because we drink animal blood. If you don't drink animal blood then your eyes are black."
"Alright." I said then grabbed his hand and started to walk again. He planted his feet and it made me spin around.
"I just told you that my family and me are vampires and all you can say is alright?"
Well you said that no harm was going to come to me then its alright. Besides I knew there was something different about you and your family I am not stupid! If you don't leave me then it's OK."He stood there looking confused and took everything in that I said. Then I realized how crazy that it must sound to him."What would you like for me to do? Would you like me to run away, scream, and tell you that I never want to see you again?" I asked him irritated.
"No but I would like for you to freak a tiny bit. Like run away but come back to me." He said still looking confused.
"Fine" I sighed. I ripped my hand out of his and started to walk away. When I got ten feet away from him I spun around to look at him. I saw the hurt in his eyes then shouted "Why did you tell me? Like I care what you are! I can't stand you anymore! Leave me alone you stupid, filthy, lying, VAMPIRE!" I started to laugh (that would have ruined everything) but I held it in. Then I spun back around. When I did this I twisted my ankle and fell in the sand. I couldn't hold in the laughter then. He was by me in seconds, so fast I got dizzy. He started to examine my ankle not looking in my eyes. I grabbed his chin to make him look me in the eyes before I said "Do you honestly believe I care that your a vampire?! You could be a mass murderer and I wouldn't care as long as you stay with me! I love you Nicholas Micheal Larson and I will never want to live if your not in my life!"
"I know" he sighed. "I love you too Nicola Marie Prenson and I will never leave you if you don't want me to! You are the reason why I haven't completely lost myself."
Then he kissed me. The kiss I was waiting for all night. It was the passionate I'll love you forever kiss.
"Come on" he said as he pulled me to my feet. I put weight on my ankle and screamed in pain.I looked at my ankle and it was swelling.
"Oh my freakin GOD!" I screamed in his ear.
He chuckled then said "come on." He picked me upand started walkimg to the car.
"You know this would be really romantic if I didn't have a swollen ankle." I told him with a grin.
He put me in his car and walked to the other side with great speed I got dizy. He started to drive. Instead of gkoing into town (which was to the right) he turned left.
"Where are we going? Town is that way" I said pointing over my shoulder.
"Well who said we were going to town?" He asked me with a grin of his own.
"Well I don't know I think it maybe, but I could be wrong, my swollen ankle!" I said raising my voice.
"I'll give you something better and cheaper. We are going to my house and having my father look at your ankle." He said.
"Well...Oh" was all I could manage to say.
"It'll be OK. They all know about you" he said.

3 comments:

  1. nice girl, keep on writing! ^_^ (by the way changing the scenary and charaters names doesn't keep it from being bella and edward. *constructive criticism not bashing you* try giving them different friends and personalities too.)

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  2. ohhhh! that's sounds interesting then! i love you darling, i wasn't trying to insult you! thank you for not biting my head off. love you, gomenosai! ^_^" i can be a bit quick to judge... (type of person who puts the book down if it isn't interesting by the end of the first ch...also the type of person who finds all books/stories interesting) your story is really interesting i just saw a parallel. i love you.

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