Friday, April 3, 2009

Chapter one final!

I went through school in a daze. I don't remember anything the teachers said. The only thing I do remember is Nicholas watching me like I was a bomb ready to go off. Then by the end of the day he got Andrew, Allison, Micheal, Tiffany, Robert, and Dawn doing it as well.
When I noticed all of them staring as the parking lot I got mad and yelled. "Why do you keep staring at me like I'm fragile?!" I shouted at them. "It's not the weirdest thing that has ever happened to me! SO WHAT! Nathan's coming after me! BIG FREAKING DEAL!"
Micheal never heard me yell like that before so he laughed at me. Which got me laughing and soon all the others were laughing as well.
When we got home I was ambushed by Rachael. "Oh honey" she said as she pulled me into a bone crushing hug. "Are you OK?"
"NO!" I gasped out."I...Can't...Breath!"
She blushed "Sorry. Are you alright?"
"Yes," I said. "It's not the first time my life has been altered by vampires and I'm sure it won't be the last."
Despite Nicholas fit, I ate dinner at home before the game. Then we got ready for the game. I fixed my hair and they had to get stuff to make them look human. When we were ready Nicholas, Tiffany, Micheal, and me got in my car (Nicholas drove again). While everyone else, including Donald and Rachael, got in the Hummer.
When we got to the football Field I went to leave to go meet with the other cheerleaders. Nicholas grabbed a hold of my arm and spun me around. I feel into him and felt his body move as he chuckled.
"Well what did you do that for" I asked irritated.
"So I could do this" he said as he grabbed my chin and pulled it towards his face. He kissed me with his passionate kiss. I wrapped my arms around his neck and put my fingers in his hair.
When we heard someone clear their throat we parted. I put my head on his chest so no one could see me blush. He kissed the top of my head and squeezed me tight. When I was sure my face was back to it's normal color I pulled away from him and looked into his eyes.
"I haven't told you lately that I love you. Me kissing you that way shows you and every one else that I love you and always will" he said.
When he said that I heard awes come from Rachael, Tiffany, Dawn, and Allison, while the guys groaned at him.
"I love you too. But right now I have to go! I'll see you at half-time" I said then ran to the meeting place.
By half-time we were winning 21-7. So everyone was in a good mood. Specifically me, I sat on Nicholas lap eating a candy bar as the band performed their half-time show.
I felt really safe for the moment until I felt someone staring at me. I looked around to see where it was coming from. That's when i noticed a new face in the crowd. He has blond hair in spikes under the hood of his hoodie. His face is pale and stunning, his grin stretched from ear to ear, and he has BLACK eyes! I tensed up and Nicholas felt it. He squeezed me tight so I looked away from the beauty and towards Nicholas.
"Are you OK" he asked with a look of concern on his face.
I stole a glance to where the beauty was...he was gone. "Yeah I'm fine. Just upset because the second half is starting" I lied. `I must've imagined him' I thought. `Or Nicholas would've seen him'.
I cheered through the second half absent-minded. I only noticed something big when I was being pulled onto the football field to the circle of football players for the annual chant. The other cheerleaders put me by my ex-boyfriend Daniel. After the chant he grabbed me and pulled me to the side.
"Nikki" he started to look nervous. "I know I messed up big time between us, but could you ever give me another chance?"
"A second chance? Are you serious?! Daniel I caught you cheating on me! I don't want to talk about this. I have a boyfriend remember?!" I yelled at him. I was so mad I stormed straight to my car and waited there for the others to show up.I thought about everything that Daniel and I went through.
It was sophomore year and I was the new girl. Daniel was assigned to show me around. We instantly connected and a few weeks later we were boyfriend and girlfriend. I went from the new girl and least popular to being the most popular in less than a month.
I thought he was the one. We were inseparable and everyone thought we were going to be together forever. He was my first kiss and love. He made me feel special.
It was the beginning of our junior year. Nicholas was the new kid. It was my job to tutor him so he could catch up. We got finished early so I thought I would surprise Daniel by going to his house. When I got there I noticed a strange car in his driveway. I knocked on his door and when he answered it he was half dressed with another girl hanging all over him. He knew he was busted, he apoligized but I couldn't stand there and listen to his annoying apoligizes. I jumped in my car and drove home.
When I got home Nicholas was in front of my house. He had on eof my books in his arm. I don't know how it happened but hehad me in his arms and I was crying on his chest. When I was finished his t-shirt was soaked and I was apologizing. He became my boyfriend, then he became my true love. I knew that Nicholas was my ture love because everytime I look in his eyes there's something there that Daniel never had. Nolan has love for me in his eyes.

When Nicholas and his family showed up we hung out until the line of cars disappeared. We talked about the wheather and the game. Nicholas had his arm over my shoulder and I was holding his hand. I noticed that Daniel hadn't gotten in his car yet to drive away. He stood by his car and was staring at NIcholas and me. I then leaned in and kissed Nicholas on his cheek, when Ilooked back to Daniel he was in his car and was speeding off.
We were finally the only people, well ones, left in the parking lot. I sighed releived that we would be leaving soon. We stood there in silence for a while.
"Even though this is so much fun, I'm hungry so I think we are going to leave" Andrew said grabbing Allisons hand. "Unless you would like for us to bite Nikki."When he said this Nicholas growled. "I was just kidding" he said as he and Allison were running into the night.
I yawned not realizing I was tired. Nicholas put me in the car. While he was walking around to get in Dawn and Robert jumped in the back seat. WHen Nicholas finally got in I grabbed his hand, he kissed my hand then started to drive. As he was driving my eyes started to droop and before I knew it I was asleep.
I had a nightmare, the beauty from the game was in it. He stood in front of me smiling his wicked smile. He stood there with his hand out for me to grab. THe sky behind him was blood red. On the ground behind him were the bodies of Nicholas and Rachel. All around me were his goons and they were holding Donald, Micheal, Tiffany, Allison, Dawn and Robert. They were ready to kill them, my family, my life was going to end.

Friday, March 6, 2009

Chapter one part two~ The Secret He Kept From Me.

I sighed at the thought of that wonderful day. He felt that I was up and squeezed me.
"Good morning sleepy head." he purred in my ear.
"Shut up" I grumbled (I'm really not a morning person).
"What’s wrong?" he asked concerned.
"Nothing I was just kidding. Besides I am the only one that sleeps around here so I get to wake up on the wrong side of the bed if I wish to!" I told him trying to be serious.
I wiggled out of his arms and sat on the edge of the bed. I was in his bed because I live with his family and him. My parents died when I was seventeen. As always before my parents leave we take a visit to the lawyers. When we get there my parents ask me that if they died who would I want to live with and have custody of me. This time when I was asked I said Mr. and Mrs. Larson. My parents agreed and so their will was changed. Two days later their plane went down and now I live with the Larson's.
"Are you OK?" he asked me.
"Yeah I was just thinking." I told him. Instead of asking me about what he kissed me. He always knows what I'm thinking. "What is today?" I asked him.
"Friday" he said.
"Thank god!" I said relieved it was the weekend. "Are we doing anything today after school?"
"Well I 'm going to take my cheerleader to a quick dinner. Then I am taking her to her football game." He said as he wound his finger in one of my black curls.
"Ugh! I forgot about the stupid game!" I said running my fingers through his brown hair. "Do I have to go? Can I please quit? The season's almost over anyways. Please!" I pleaded knowing he wouldn't let me.
"No quitting!" he said with a chuckle.
"Fine!" I got mad at him and stormed across the room to the closet. "If I am going to this stupid game then so are you and everyone else! And I am not going to cheer for the basketball team."
"Of course we are going are you crazy? I don't care that you don't want to cheer during basketball season. My parents and me just want you to have what normal of a life as you can get. I was just wondering...do you get to keep the uniform?" He said smiling his rotten smile.
I rolled my eyes and grabbed the black and silver uniform out of the closet. I reached up to grab my shoes. I couldn't grab them, then out of nowhere his hand passed mine and grabbed my shoes.
"Thanks" I said then looked at him. He looked worried, "Are you OK?"
"I don't know. Do you get to keep the uniform?" He asked with a grin spreading across his face.
"You jack butt!" I said smacking his face playfully. "I thought there was something seriously wrong!"
I kicked him out of the room and got dressed. I grabbed my books off the desk and walked out of the room. He was leaning against the wall when I walked out. When saw me he whistled and walked in a circle around me.
"Wow! I am going to say it again... I love my cheerleader." he said.
"Stop it! We're going to be late!" I said as he grabbed my books out of my hand. I started to walk down the stairs with him behind me.
"Finally!" I heard a gruff voice say from the living room. "I thought you two weren't ever coming down." He walked in first. All muscles with blond hair and aquamarine eyes.
"Micheal" a quieter female voice sang. "Shut up", she walked in next. She has blond curly hair that goes to the middle of her back, she has aquamarine eyes...Tiffany.
After her walked in another girl and boy. They were wrapped in each others arms. The girl was just as attractive as Tiffany. She has shoulder length blond hair and aquamarine eyes. She was smiling the best smile I've ever seen, Dawn. The boy,who was in her arms as well as holding her, has brown curly hair and aquamarine eyes. He is a few inches taller than her and he also has muscles but they are not as large as Micheal's. He has a look of calm about him, Robert.
After Dawn and Robert walked in came another couple, they were holding hands. The girl has brown hair cut in different layers it rested just below her shoulders. Her eyes were a blue zircon (which means that she is hungry). Her eyes were larger,her face looks like one a supermodel would have, she was taller than Tiffany and Dawn, Allison. The boy holding her hand was taller than Robert. He has dark brown hair, his eyes were a deep blue zircon (darker than Allison's). This meant that he and Allison were going to go hunting tonight. He looks like he is ready to fight all the time, but he is always smiling, Andrew.
After Andrew and Allison walked in Donald and Rachael walked in (Mr. and Mrs. Larson). They are both as attractive as their "children". Donald is taller than all of his kids, he also has muscles that hide under his clothes. He has blond curly hair, and has aquamarine eyes. Rachael is also beautiful. She has brown straight hair that is cut an inch above her shoulders, her eyes were lighter than everyone else's, and her face is the brightest.
I guess you could say I am the black sheep. All of them have pale (white) skin. They are all beautiful and have aquamarine eyes. Their hearts don't beat and mine does and my blood flows. My skin is darker than theirs, my eyes are peridot. I am also fragile, they watch me like I am glass, they're afraid that I can break.
"Alright we're here," Nicholas started to say. "What do you want to tell us?" he looked at his father. It got quiet as Donald was telling his children what he wanted them to know without saying a word out loud.
I sighed and tried to leave the room when Nicholas held me hand tighter. He started to squeeze it so tight it started to hurt. "Um babe," I said trying to loosen his grip. As I was trying to loosen it he tightened it.I then squealed from the pain, that's when he noticed that he was hurting me.
"Sorry," he said with a look of pain on his face. He started to inspect my hand, when the others started to stare at me with a look of concern on their faces.
"What? It's no big deal! My hand isn't sprained, broke or hurt in anyway. See" I said as I held up my hand for them and flexed it. "So who is riding with me to school?" They all looked worried so I sighed. "Nick is going to drive."
As soon as i was finished saying this Allison volunteered herself and Andrew to ride with us.

When we got into my convertible I positioned myself so I could look at Nicholas in his face.
"Alright," I said. "Spill."
"Spill what?" He asked innocently.
"Nicholas don't just tell me!" I yelled at him.
"Don't what and tell you what?" he said avoiding my eyes.
"Tell me what got you so upset you had to take it out on my hand." I said knowing it was a low blow to his stomach.
He heavily sighed at me then said. "Donald and Rachael just wanted to tell us that Nathan is coming to town and he is bringing friends."
I heard a hiss come from the back seat and I jumped. I forgot that Allison and Andrew were in the backseat. I was still confused as to why it wasn't good that he was coming. "So who is Nathan and why, judging from the hiss, don't we like him?"
"Because Nathan is not like us and neither are his friends!'" Allison growled. "They hunt humans for fun."
"OK" I said still confused.
"They hunt a specific type of human" Andrews voice rang out.
"Andrew!" Nicholas growled giving him a dirty look in the rear view mirror.
"She needs to know Nicholas" Allison piped in.
"Fine! But do it easily." Nicholas said glancing at me.
"They hunt a human who has an athletic body, beautiful face, dark hair and.." Andrew said but didn't finish.
"And what?" I asked annoyed that he wouldn't tell me. I looked at Nicholas "Nicholas and what?"
"Peridot green eyes" he said finally looking at me in my eyes.
"Oh so what your saying is that they are coming here to hunt me" I said sounding brave but I was really shaking to the bone. I felt a hand come up and squeeze my shoulder. I looked at the hand and it's black nail polish, Allison.

wOOOOOOOO

Elizabeth is the shit!

Wednesday, March 4, 2009

Chapter one part one~ The Secret He Kept Form Me.

I woke up in his arms again. I've been doing this ever since he told me his secret. He thought I was going to freak out and never talk to him again. I couldn't help to not talk to him I love him.
I remember when he told me, it was like a dream. He took me to the beach and we walked around as the sun set. When it was completely set (the sun) he turned and faced me. He stared into my peridot eyes and I stared into his aquamarine eyes. I smiled up at him expecting him to kiss me.
He just smiled back at me then said "I have a secret to tell you. It's about my family and me. You can't tell anyone else."
"O.k." I said slightly afraid that he was going to tell me that his family and him were murderers and they were running away from the police. That this was the last night I would see him.
"Don't freak out, alright?" He said looking at me seriously. "I want you to know that no harm will ever come to you. My family and I are vampires. I guess you could say that we are not normal vampires, if there is even a thing. We stick to animal blood all the time. The only time we drink human blood is if we are hurt. When we do need it my father buys it from the blood bank. The reason we have aquamarine eyes is because we drink animal blood. If you don't drink animal blood then your eyes are black."
"Alright." I said then grabbed his hand and started to walk again. He planted his feet and it made me spin around.
"I just told you that my family and me are vampires and all you can say is alright?"
Well you said that no harm was going to come to me then its alright. Besides I knew there was something different about you and your family I am not stupid! If you don't leave me then it's OK."He stood there looking confused and took everything in that I said. Then I realized how crazy that it must sound to him."What would you like for me to do? Would you like me to run away, scream, and tell you that I never want to see you again?" I asked him irritated.
"No but I would like for you to freak a tiny bit. Like run away but come back to me." He said still looking confused.
"Fine" I sighed. I ripped my hand out of his and started to walk away. When I got ten feet away from him I spun around to look at him. I saw the hurt in his eyes then shouted "Why did you tell me? Like I care what you are! I can't stand you anymore! Leave me alone you stupid, filthy, lying, VAMPIRE!" I started to laugh (that would have ruined everything) but I held it in. Then I spun back around. When I did this I twisted my ankle and fell in the sand. I couldn't hold in the laughter then. He was by me in seconds, so fast I got dizzy. He started to examine my ankle not looking in my eyes. I grabbed his chin to make him look me in the eyes before I said "Do you honestly believe I care that your a vampire?! You could be a mass murderer and I wouldn't care as long as you stay with me! I love you Nicholas Micheal Larson and I will never want to live if your not in my life!"
"I know" he sighed. "I love you too Nicola Marie Prenson and I will never leave you if you don't want me to! You are the reason why I haven't completely lost myself."
Then he kissed me. The kiss I was waiting for all night. It was the passionate I'll love you forever kiss.
"Come on" he said as he pulled me to my feet. I put weight on my ankle and screamed in pain.I looked at my ankle and it was swelling.
"Oh my freakin GOD!" I screamed in his ear.
He chuckled then said "come on." He picked me upand started walkimg to the car.
"You know this would be really romantic if I didn't have a swollen ankle." I told him with a grin.
He put me in his car and walked to the other side with great speed I got dizy. He started to drive. Instead of gkoing into town (which was to the right) he turned left.
"Where are we going? Town is that way" I said pointing over my shoulder.
"Well who said we were going to town?" He asked me with a grin of his own.
"Well I don't know I think it maybe, but I could be wrong, my swollen ankle!" I said raising my voice.
"I'll give you something better and cheaper. We are going to my house and having my father look at your ankle." He said.
"Well...Oh" was all I could manage to say.
"It'll be OK. They all know about you" he said.

Thursday, February 26, 2009




Hello This is My first BLOG!!




So this is when I tell you whats going on! In creative writing we have journals and I started to write a story that is what this is!


So it's about this girl named Nicola Marie Prenson. Here is a description of Nicola, she is 5'6 with an athletic body, she weighs about 120. She has dark almost black curly hair. She has Peridot eyes. She always sees the best in others and she gets her heart broken.

She is in love with this guy his name is Nicholas Larson. He is a vampire and he keeps a secret from her. He has Aquamarine eyes and has brown short hair that covers his eyes.
Nicola is turned into a vampire by an evil vampire named Nathan. He has blond hair that is styled as spikes he has black eyes.
So that is the overview for now stay tuned for the story! JK!